Saturday, September 16, 2006

Still Working...


New titles, and help would be appreciated. I have * my favs. This is new to me. Never had to come up with a title when doing commercial work.

* The Offering
Dreams Offered
* Life's Gifts
Creating Passion
First Step
Unwrapped
Growth
Dreams Begun
Gifts
* Time to Grow
Time to Give

Still working on the list below...

18 comments:

Teri C said...

First let me say, I love doing titles. I wrote for a newspaper for 5 years and loved coming up with a unique title.

I like all the ones you like and here are a few ideas:

*A Reflection of Dreams
It's Magical
Time to Reflect
*Magical Reflection

I seem to keep going back to reflection, I guess because you did such a beautiful job on it.

I love this gorgeous piece of art.

Robin Neudorfer said...

Teri - How dear you are to take the time to help me. What luck for me that you have had some experience. I love your suggestions, so I will let them sit and I know one will win out. Thank you for your very special comments. You have made my day.

Ginny said...

Robin, Your latest version is just wonderful. The magnolia leaves really now really anchor the images. Titles, Yikes, this one makes me think "Please, Be Our Guest" then, as the image is so calming, perhaps "Time Out" You'l think of something. Well done. Ginny

Robin Neudorfer said...

Ginny - Thank you for your constant encouragement.

Linda said...

I think Teri's right about the word "reflection" or something along those lines. With only the occasional exception, I'm TERRIBLE at naming paintings -- I tend to want to name them things like "Tabletop Still Life Number Eleven: September" and just get on to the next one. This drives my art teacher CRAZY! The title, however, can be really important ... so get as much feedback as you can! The drawing, by the way, looks FANTASTIC!

Robin Neudorfer said...

Thank you Linda. I am not going to settle on anything. This particular drawing is much too important to me, so it has to have the meaning that the symbols in the drawing have. It all is a process. As is the next one.

Karen said...

Beautiful drawing, Robin.

I don't know your symbolism so these may be off-target, but naming things was one of my favorite things to do as an ad agency writer ... so, I'll play, too ...

Simple Gifts
Opening Day
Awaken
The Greening
New Life
The Unfolding
Clarity

Robin Neudorfer said...

Karen - thanks for playing the game. I really appreciate it. Love some of yours, and when I finish I know one will stand out over all the rest. I am sure Michael will have some input too.
Thank you for your kind words and help.

Renate said...

Beautiful drawing! As for the title, I'm not got at such things, but I thought "contemplation" when I first saw it.

The Epiphany Artist said...

morning pattern
Patterns of morning
something old something new

fireman's kid said...

Robin, this just keeps getting better! I am also horribe at naming paintings, but will let you know if I come up with anything.
Stacy

Mary said...

I love all of your titles. This is I think your best work and that is not easy to say because you excell at everything.

Toni said...

This is absolutly beautiful!
I'm not good at titles but what comes to mind is

'Tomorrow's Dream'

It will come to you.

Robin Neudorfer said...

Terri - I like those

Robin Neudorfer said...

Stacy - it is an art in itself. Thanks for checking back in. Your encouragement means a lot.

Robin Neudorfer said...

Mary - what can I say Dear Friend, but I appreciate all of your praise. You lift my spirits every time we talk.

Robin Neudorfer said...

Toni - I really like your suggestion ... a lot!

Laura said...

This a beautiful drawing, Robin. Fun to see its progress, too. I'm in the minority here as far as titles go. I'd let the drawing's meaning and power speak for itself----it will be different for each viewer. I'd call it something like 'Black, White, Gray.' A more 'poetic' title could have the effect of oversentimentalizing it and rob it of some of the mystery behind the juxtaposition of the objects you've chosen.